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A Roadmap to Joy's avatar

Beautiful and meaning. I enjoyed this.

Noah Bartley's avatar

So thankful, Bonnie!!

Iryna's avatar

Indeed creation cries “how long” against this tragedy. Love this piece, because indeed Heaven will wipe our tears.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, Iryna! I appreciate you reading.

Zane Paxton's avatar

Powerful imagery. Really loved the ending.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, brother. I appreciate you!

Abram Newcomer's avatar

Sounds like some "Galahad and the Grail" sneaking in for that fifth stanza 🙂 I love the extended rhymes in the ballad stanza form. Well done; a beautiful poem.