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Zane Paxton's avatar

Dude!! These have some punch to them. Blowing me away.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, my friend!! So kind!

Julia Carlisle's avatar

I love how the structure of each poem takes the shape of a mountain. Very cool. Intentional, I guess?

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you Julia!! Yes, you got it! Absolutely intentional

Kyra Bredenhof's avatar

Wow. This is beautiful! Well done!

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, Kyra!

Jordan Elings's avatar

I really love the symbology you put into this. The "pregnant with glory" and "Uncreated light" especially!

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, Jordan!!

Benjamin Popham's avatar

Really enjoyed this, especially the last one. What good and inspiring wording. It makes me more thankful for our powerful and gracious king.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you for reading and sharing, Benjamin!

Chuck Phillips's avatar

And the men on the first 2, joined the Man on the third!

Noah Bartley's avatar

You got it! One of my favorite moments in Scripture.

Oliver Hendley's avatar

these are really good.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, Oliver!!

David Rizzo's avatar

Such a well structured set of 3 mountains and 3 prophets, transfiguring all of us with radiance.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, David!!

Dom Francisco's avatar

That last line is powerful. Love it man.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you for reading, Dom!

Maddie Wilcox's avatar

"And bears our dreadful Jerusalems" Love it.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, Maddie!!

Jon Murphy's avatar

Brilliant 👏🏼

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, Jon!!

Kilby Austin's avatar

“Our dreadful Jerusalems” is very effective.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you, Kilby!!

Adam R. A. Biro's avatar

Love it. Thank you for this.

Noah Bartley's avatar

Thank you for reading and sharing, Adam!

Kimberly Phinney's avatar

Such powerful poetry. We are blessed to have you!